Character Profile: Learé (with excerpt)

Today's blog post is about one of the main protagonist: Learé. Learé's introduction was an interesting one. Originally, Éadra was the only protagonist. I had just changed her name from Lightfoot to Swiftfoot (I had a different naming scheme at the time, obviously). Then one night I had a crazy dream where my story crossed over with Lord of the Rings, and instead of Swiftfoot being Lightfoot's new name, she was her twin. (She was also dating Treebeard, but that;s a whole other story!) I liked the idea so much I kept it when I woke up, and they've been sisters ever since.


From her beginning, Learé has been a foil for her twin. Where Éadra is a gentle healer, Learé is a fierce warrior. Éadra is openly emotional, but Learé buries her feelings inside. This does not mean that she is unkind or doesn't feel; she's just afraid of being hurt--a side effect of her mother's death so many years ago. She's definitely the more prone of the two to being sarcastic.


Her mother's death also affected her in another way: she feels a strong need for control. Her helplessness to prevent her mom from dying has led her to do everything she can to prevent tragedy in any other aspect of her life. Letting Éadra get herself captured is probably the hardest thing she's ever done. Deep down, though, she still cares about people. Her trouble is that she shows it in an over-protective way to those she loves most; she tries to prevent situations from putting them in danger, and will argue with them if they want to do something she sees as dangerous. In the end though, she will back down, especially if they point out that she's being too much. Part of her character arc in the story is learning to let go, and not be a control freak.


Name: Learé (pronounced Leer-ay)
Species: Elf
Hair color: BlackEye color: green
Height: 5'4"Favorite color: Blue
Favorite Food: All kinds of soups (She also harbors a secret passion for chocolate, but she won't admit it!)
Least favorite food: Onions
Likes: Archery, sword fighting, horse-back riding, trying new things; in general, keeping active and busy
Hates: sitting around, waiting, losing control
Deepest wish: not something she even quite admits to herself, but to settle down with someone and find peace in her life.


Excerpt: (Learé and two other elves (Phen and Tasu) are riding griffins back from a journey)  (Sorry it isn't broken into paragraphs. I am having issues with blogger today.)

It was just after dawn one spring morning when they reached the mountains again. They came in nearer to the pass than they’d intended and discovered that Erron had soldiers waiting not only at the pass, but for some distance to the west as well, as though he’d been anticipating that they might try to go around. And those soldiers had crossbows. An arrow came whizzing toward Learé, and her griffin panicked. It dodged the bolt and took off, out of control. It was all Learé could do to hang on, let alone reach for her bow and arrows. She yelled at her griffin and glanced back at the other two. Phen was still in the air, barely, but Tasu and the two pack griffins had been taken down. She called to Phen to escape while he could, and he obeyed, but not without shouting a command at her griffin. Her griffin wheeled to follow his as he flew up in front of the rising sun, making it difficult for the soldiers below to take aim. Learé used that moment of weakness to string her bow as quickly as she could, and not a moment too soon; there were now six griffin riders flying at them. Her own griffin panicked again, and Learé called out to Phen as she fumbled for an arrow. There was no way she could fire arrows accurately while trying to keep her seat on a terrified griffin. Phen yelled another command, and the griffin stopped and hovered long enough for her to fire off a couple arrows, but before she could even make sure they hit the creature was off again. There was no stopping it this time. It had never moved so fast, and it was all Learé could do to not fall off. She accidentally dropped her bow as she grabbed instinctively at the griffin’s neck feathers for a handhold. She’d never felt it fly so fast before; soon she was burying her head in its neck to keep from vomiting. Her heart pounded as the creature flew on and on; she could hear the other griffin riders shouting, but their voices were growing more distant. After what could have been a few minutes or over an hour, it finally slowed, circled, and landed. She could feel its heavy breathing as she sat there trying to catch her own breath. She slid carefully off the griffin’s back, then leaned against its side as she tried to steady her feet. When she raised her head, she saw Phen standing next to his own griffin a few feet away. “Are you alright?” he asked her.“No, I’m not alright,” she said. “I misjudged where we were and brought us too close to the pass. My griffin went crazy and took me goodness-knows-where. Tasu fell and I have no idea if she even survived. And Erron’s soldiers are probably still after us.”“Okay, first off, you weren’t the one leading us. We were following Tasu,” Phen said.“But I should have realized where we were,” said Learé.“No, you shouldn’t have. We were traveling in unfamiliar territory. We were all doing the best we could, and you can’t blame yourself.” “Well at any rate, I need to go back and see if Tasu’s okay. Just tell me how to keep this stupid griffin from panicking again.”“That griffin saved your life,” Phen said. You won’t be able to keep him from panicking; he’s not been trained for war like your horses. But he came from a line of racing griffins, so he’s a whole lot faster than Erron’s beasts.”“Great, maybe I can dodge around them then.”“Learé,” Phen said in his gentlest voice yet, “Tasu didn’t survive. And even if she did, they would have taken her to interrogate her by now. It’s too dangerous for you to go back, and it would all be for nothing.”Learé felt desperate. “Maybe not,” she said. “Maybe she was knocked unconscious and they mistook her for dead.”“Erron’s men are far too thorough for that. And how will you fight them? I saw you drop your bow.”Learé slumped to the ground, defeated. She put her head in her hands. Phen walked up and put his hand on her back, but she leaned away from his touch.“I’m sorry,” he said. “I know it’s hard. I didn’t want to leave her behind either.”“Nothing is working right,” she said. “I can’t keep anyone safe or alive.”“Yes, you can,” said Phen. “Sometimes things happen that are out of our control, but you can’t let that stop you. And look at what you have managed. You got the ilei; that could potentially save hundreds of lives and help us end this war.”“If we can find our way back.”“We aren’t lost; I know where we are.”“You do?” Learé looked up at him. “Sure. I had better control of my griffin than you did. I just followed you when yours took off to make sure you were okay. Unless I’m mistaken, all we need to do is head north and a little east and we will hit the beginnings of the flarefox desert, near where we left the mountain when looking for dragons.”“Let’s get going then,” said Learé, standing up. “Are you sure you’ll be okay?” asked Phen.“I’ll be fine,” Learé snapped. She just wanted to get going, to have something to do. And she wanted to put as much distance between her and the tragedy as possible. So she and Phen remounted their griffins and took off flying.

Book Excerpt

One reader requested a book excerpt for a post, so here's a piece from the beginning or the book. (It has not yet had its final edit, so there could be errors. I apologize in advance.) Next time will be another character profile :)

The elf princess Éadra burst out of the hidden passageway in the wall, stumbled, and fell.  She smiled as she picked herself up, brushing her long black hair out of her green eyes. For the first time in ages, she felt a sense of hope. It was small, true, but it was there.  She glanced out of the window and saw the sun creeping up from the trees of the forest below her.  She had to find Learé.  

Her twin was in the armory practicing with her sword.  Hair pulled up in a tight black bun and green eyes flashing, she shot around the room, double-edged sword slicing through the air like a beam of light.  To  Éadra, Learé seemed to be doing some sort of deadly dance.  She had a practiced grace and dexterity that  Éadra could only dream of.  She stood there a few moments admiring her twin before calling out her name.

On hearing her name, the warrior princess turned on a dime, bringing her sword down to her side and letting her shield drop.  “Where have you been?” she said.  “Erron’s men attacked again while you were gone.  Seven hundred dead, six hundred more wounded, and you weren’t here.”  She threw her sword down to emphasize her point.  

Éadra held up her hand and looked up into her sister’s eyes.  Seven hundred dead, she thought.  She writhed inside, and for a moment questioned the wisdom of leaving so suddenly.  No, she told herself, it’s okay.  I did what I needed to do.  I hope. Still, she could not shake the feeling that her twin's criticisms were warranted, and her stomach twisted. But she refused to show it. “I’m sorry, Learé,” she finally said.  “I hadn’t meant to be gone so long, but I’ve found something that will turn the tide of the war.” She smiled, but Learé said nothing, her face a mask. So  Éadra continued.

“I found unicorns,” she said.

Finally the mask broke, and Learé's eyes widened.“What are you talking about?  The unicorns died out long before we were born.”

“The ones that lived in the forest did.”

“Which is all there ever were.”

“Come with me,” Éadra said, grabbing her sister's hand and dragging her out of the armory.

They made their way back through the castle and into Éadra's chambers, where the bed was shoved away from the wall. The hole that Éadra had come through was gone, replaced with a mural of a unicorn on solid wall. Up until last week, it had been hidden by the canopy of Éadra’s bed.  

“That's just a painting,” Learé said.

“Not quite,” said Éadra. She took off her necklace and tossed it to Learé.  “I dropped that behind the bed last week, and when I moved it I found the mural.”

“You should be more careful with mom’s necklace.”

“Look carefully at the gem.”

Learé rolled the star-shaped diamond around in her hand.  “I don’t see anything.”  Éadra took it back, flipped it over, and pointed to an engraving in the bottom right ray.  

“Heloth Uniqa,” Learé read.  “So you spent the past week trying to hike an unclimbable peak?”  Then she noticed that the wall had opened.  

“No, I spent it finding my way through the tunnel that leads to the top.  Not all the unicorns died when the flarefoxes attacked.  Some of them found a new home on the highest peak in the Hemya mountain range.”  

Learé studied her twin as though looking for some sort of sign that she was lying. Then she said carefully, “You realize what you are saying, don't you? Unicorns are supposed to be violent creatures. If you've found some, if we could enlist their help...that would change everything.”

There was an underlying tension to her voice, Éadra thought. It was as though she was pleading for it to be true. They needed good news, after all the horror they'd been through together. And so  Éadra hesitated, knowing Learé wouldn’t like what she had to say next.  “They have agreed to help us, and this could change the tide, but not in the way you’re thinking.  The unicorns were warriors, once. They were violent and bloodthirsty. In fact, they provoked the flarefoxes. But that went horribly wrong, and those who survived vowed never to fight again. Their descendents on the mountain have never had any training. They would be butchered in a fight. What they’ve agreed to do, though, is just shelter us for now.  They’ll let our people hide there while we recover our strength, but they won’t fight for us.”

Learé glared. “I want a way to win,  Éadra. I don't want a place to cower in defeat.”

Éadra glared right back, “It's not cowering in defeat. It's giving our tired, wounded soldiers a chance to rest and recuperate. We can't just keep sending them out until they drop dead from exhaustion. It's giving you a break from leading them. And it's giving the civilians a chance to get away from this war-torn forest.”

Learé folded her arms against her chest. Her tone was clipped as she spoke. “This is hardly the time for an extended vacation.”

Éadra sighed inside. She knew Learé would react like this, and she hadn't even reached the worst part yet. “I haven’t finished yet. We aren't going to just be hiding. I want you to take our people to Heloth to recover, yes. But while you do that, I’m going to find Erron’s fortress.”

Learé sat down on the bed in surprise. “Are you out of your mind?  Nobody who tries to do that ever comes back.”

Good,  Éadra thought. She's sitting down.  “Not when they try to just follow the soldiers home, no. But we’ve never sent anyone to find it through being captured now, have we?”

“What? No. You’re not going to get captured.”

Éadra sighed again, this time out loud. How was she supposed to convince Learé of this when she was uncertain it was a good idea herself? But the fact remained: they were desperate. They'd been on the defensive far too long, and it was costing them. And that, perhaps, was her selling point. Out loud she said,

“We can’t stay on the defensive forever. We’re losing.  Besides, there was one exception to the unicorns’ refusal.”

Learé laughed bitterly. “What, sacrifice one of your princesses to the enemy, and then we’ll help you?  Otherwise too bad, guess you’ll just have to spend the rest of your days hiding on a mountain.”

Éadra clenched her fists, biting back frustration. “No, they said they would help us if we found the fortress. Then we can lay siege on it or something.  I’ll get captured, scout out his fortress, and find a way to escape. In the meantime, you'll be teaching the unicorns how to fight. Then once I escape and meet you there, we can lay out battle plans; exploit his weaknesses, instead of him always exploiting ours.”

“And you plan to get out how?  Walk up to the guards and say ‘Excuse me, but I was just dropping in for a visit.  Do you think I could go now? I need to go home to my people so that we can conquer your castle.”

Éadra knew Learé was right, but she had one small hope she clung to. She sat down on the bed by her twin. “I’ll find a way, Learé. Remember the stories Mom used to tell us about the Aquinix? How he's always helps the elves in their hour of need? Well, the unicorns have a similar tale, about how a great bird came to their ancestors in the aftermath of the battle with the flarefoxes and led them to the mountains. They said he looked like a cross between an eagle and a swan, and was as blue as the sea. He sounds just like Mom described him. I think he's real, Learé. I just need to find a way to contact him, to convince him we need his help.”

“And the perfect place to do that from is a dungeon in Erron's fortress.”

Éadra shrugged. “Maybe he'll see me there and realize just how great our need is. Or maybe I'll try praying to him—Mom said he was some kind of messenger from our Creator. Maybe he can hear prayers. Anyway, if that doesn't work, if I can't find a way out, I’ll find a way to poison Erron himself.  I’m not going to let Mom’s deaths be in vain.  And it will be, if we lose to Erron.  She died protecting us from him.”  

“And the perfect way to honor her death is to send one of us into his hands to be killed, just like he killed Mother when he caught her.  Éadra, your plan is ridiculous. You're relying on fantasies. You sound like some kind of tragic hero, running off into the hands of a murderer to die for your country. Well I hate to break it to you, but the world doesn't work that way. Your little plan isn't going to work.”

For one small second, Éadra lowered her eyes. Her insides writhed in a combination of anger, embarrassment, and pain. But she couldn't let Learé break her yet. She had one last card to play.

“If you don’t want to take our people to Heloth Uniqa that’s fine, but you can’t stop me from finding Erron.  I loved mother just as much as you did, and I promised her that I would protect our people.  I’m tired of watching you lead them out to battle, tired of waiting inside to heal the wounded.  I’m tired of being helpless to save so many of them, just as I couldn’t save mother.  And most of all, I’m tired of fearing that one of these days I’m going to lose you, too.  As I was looking for you earlier a scout found me and informed me that more of Erron’s men are on their way.  They’ll be here within a week.  What you do is up to you, but I’m going to make sure that I get captured, even if I have to walk out and hand myself over.  I’m tired of this.  I’m going to make certain that this war ends, one way or another.”  

Character Profile: Erron

The first of my character profiles is Erron, the villain of Elf Tears. Creating Erron (originally named Tiquniyi) has been something of a journey for me. When I first started this story, he was a very flat, stereotypical character. He was a tall, foreboding elf with long black hair who did evil because he liked being evil and wanted power. But the way the plot went required him to have character growth in a manner that wouldn't work with such a cliché character; I needed to give him real motivations, but for some time I struggled to find ones that pleased me. I played around with background stories for him, trying to at least give him a reason for being evil, but nothing really stuck.

My first real step forward in building his character came from a Star Wars expanded universe trilogy. (I don't know the name of the trilogy as a whole, though I've heard it called the Thrawn trilogy before, but the first book is Heir to the Empire.) The villain in the trilogy, Grand Admiral Thrawn, was a charismatic, fascinating character that I almost found myself rooting for at times because he was just so brilliant and interesting. I decided that I wanted my villain to be that likable (in his own way, of course! I have no desire to plagiarize), and to do that I really had to make him less two-dimensional. Over time he became less outwardly gruff and cruel. His language became a little more friendly and conversational. He started to reward loyalty and actually take care of those in his command, and their families as well. I wanted him to be outwardly friendly and charismatic, someone that people would actually want to follow. And I finally settled on a motivation for him: he wants to combine elfin magic and human technology to improve both societies. He even tried to do it by going to the elves and humans and asking them to help him, but the leaders of both cultures at the time were highly xenophobic. So, deciding that the end justified the means, he started the war to force them to work together. Of course, this wasn't entirely altruistic. He enjoys ruling the territories and the power of controlling the project himself, and at the start of the book he already has another forest of elves under his command; he is trying to take over Émere partially in revenge and partially to make them cooperate so he can prove he was right. Not that he would admit that out loud!

Anyway, here is his profile :)

Name: Erron
Species: Elf
Age: mid to late fifties
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Height: 6'3"
Likes: Hiking, rock climbing, exploring
Dislikes: being wrong
Favorite food: roasted elk and potatoes
Most hated food: anything overly sweet
Favorite animal: wyverns
Steed of choice: griffin
Life goals: find ways to combine magic and technology for cool inventions and improved quality of life

Just for fun, I'm also including the scene where Éadra first meets Erron. Perhaps more than any other, this scene shows the influence Thrawn had on the character (via the logic Erron uses in this scene, as well as the way he handles the knight's mistake.) Hopefully it doesn't border on plagiarism! (If anyone has read the Thrawn trilogy and thinks it does, please let me know). Anyway, in this scene, the knight who captured Éadra has just taken her to the castle and sends for Erron. He thinks, however, that he has captured her twin, Learé.
Meeting Erron

When they entered the castle, the knight asked a servant to send word to Erron that he had captured princess Learé. The servant must have thought the knight's breach in proprietary worth doing so, because he ran off at once. It was, however, a good half hour before Erron came.

Erron's dark brown hair came nearly to his shoulders, and he wore a silver circlet on his head. His midnight blue robes matched his eyes, which sparkled as he smiled. On his feet he wore black boots. He did not look like a very dangerous man, but he was flanked by two muscular guards with shaved heads who looked quite the opposite.  Éadra caught his eyes for a brief moment, and rage bubbled up inside of her as she realized she was facing the man who killed her mother. She quickly dropped her gaze and focused on calming down. There would be time enough later to be angry, but she could not afford it now. If she acted out, she would be killed.  

“Really, you have no business ordering my servants around,” he said to the knight. “But the news was so good I had to come. However, it appears you've caught the wrong princess.” At the knight's surprised expression, he continued, “You see, I have heard a good deal about Learé's skill in battle. My men all find her a worthy opponent. She would not have been captured so easily.

“And there's something else,” he said, touching the faint line that was all that was left of the forehead wound. “That must have been quite the cut. There is no way it healed so neatly on its own. She healed you, didn't she? I understand that  Éadra is the healer twin.” Mark was looking more and more frightened as Erron talked, so that  Éadra found herself feeling a little bad for him. But then Erron continued,

“That does not make your capture any less worthy. Go get some rest. I will send for you later to discuss your reward.” The knight marched off wearing a relieved smile.

Erron turned to  Éadra. “Now, what to do with you,” he said. “I should just kill you now. I know you let yourself be captured, and having you here puts me at risk.” He paused for a moment, and  Éadra raised her eyebrow.

“How could I possibly be a risk to you?” she said. “I'm in your territory, surrounded by your guards, with no resources at my disposal. And your fortress is so well protected, I doubt I could even escape.”

“Don't treat me like I'm an idiot,” snapped Erron. “You wouldn't have come here without some means of escape.”  Éadra took an involuntary step backwards at the sudden anger in his voice. But the anger left as suddenly at it had come, and his voice was calm when he spoke again.

“I do not wish to kill you,” he said. “You could be useful to me. I'll have to lock you away until I've decided what to do with you.” He turned to the guards. “Take her to the prison tower,” he said. “I want her in the highest cell, three guards in the room with her, and two more without. Her confinement is top priority.” The guards nodded and left the room.  

Learning magic (and a question for my readers at the end)

[Note: in this scene, the twins' childhood friend Phen has come to retrieve them from the humans and bring them back to Émere. They are now sixteen years old.]

“How much do you two know about using magic?” Phen asked the twins after they'd set up camp for the night.

“Not much,” Éadra admitted. “We were too young to learn when we left. All I remember is that it exists; the humans can't use it.”

“I've used it a few times,” said Learé, a bit defensively.

“So have I,” Éadra responded, “but never with much success, and I couldn't replicate it later.”

“Well how about I give you ladies your first real lesson then?” offered Phen.

Éadra smiled. “That would be great!”

Phen assumed a more serious expression, but with a hint of a smile underneath. “Alright, I want you to close your eyes and focus inside you.” His voice was deep and mysterious, and the girls gave him a weird look. “I'm serious!” he said. “The magic is inside you, at your core. You have to learn to feel it if you're going to access it. Once you learn to control it, you can use it almost like another hand, or something. You can extend it outside of yourself and use it to interact with what's around you. Magic is to us like technology is to the humans. It's our gift.”

“Wow. Mystical,” joked Éadra.

“You have to be kidding me,” said Learé.

Phen just rolled his eyes. “Now close your eyes and try to feel it inside you.”

This time the twins obeyed. Éadra wasn't sure what she was looking for, but she focused her mind inward and tried to examine how she felt. She focused on her breathing and tried to clear her mind. Eventually she became aware of something warm and, in her mind, golden inside of her. She tried to access it, but it seemed slippery—too difficult to grasp. She opened her eyes again. “I think I found it,” she said.

“So did I,” said Learé with a sly grin. Too late Éadra noticed the twig her sister had hidden under her hand. Without any visible movement on Learé's part, the twig came flying at Éadra. Éadra flinched, but the twig didn't even make it halfway before falling to the ground.

“What?” exclaimed Learé, turning to Phen.

“Magic usually requires direct contact,” Phen said. “It is very difficult and takes a great deal of concentration to maintain a connection once the object is released. In fact, it's impressive that you pulled that off at all.”

“Ya, I couldn't access my magic when I tried just now,” said Éadra, a hint of jealousy in her voice.

“Let's see if I can help you with that,” said Phen. “What do you want to do with it?”

“I don't know,” said Éadra. “Just . . . something.”

“It helps if you have a goal in mind,” Phen told her. “Something small.”

“What about healing this cut?” Éadra held up her hand where she'd scratchd herself earlier that day.

Phen chuckled. “That's not small,” he said. “Healing takes a great deal of practice.”

“That's too bad,” Éadra said. “I've always thought it would be cool if I could heal people magically.”

“Maybe you'll become a healer then,” said Phen. “Tell you what, why don't we try, just for fun? I'm not a healer, so I'm not good with healing magic, but maybe I can help you. Close your eyes.” Éadra obeyed, and he continued, “Good. Now find your magic again.”

It was much easier to find it this time, and soon she felt the golden warmth of her magic once again.

“Now,” she heard Phen say, “concentrate on the magic. Will a portion of it—just a small stream—to up through your body and into your hand.”

The magic was still slippery, and it took a while, but eventually Éadra managed to pull a small tendril up through her. She made it almost all the way to her hand before losing her grip.

“Shoot,” she said. She tried again, but was distracted by the feel of hands on her shoulders.

“It's okay,” Phen's voice said in her ear. “It's hard to get a hang of. Try again, and take your time. There's no hurry.”

Once again, Éadra grasped at the magic. But the feel of Phen's hands was distracting, and she kept losing it. He must have felt her tense in frustration, because he whispered, “Relax.” Éadra took a few deep breaths and calmed herself, then tried once more. This time she managed to pull the magic all the way to her hand.

“Now what,” she asked, struggling to keep it there.

“Now this,” said Phen, and she felt a trickle of water on her cut. “Water is a good conduit for magic,” he said. “Healers use it for almost everything.”

Éadra could see why. The moment the water hit her hand, everything it touched came sharply into focus. As she concentrated on the magic, she could see in her mind's eye exactly what was wrong. She could sense the torn skin and blood vessels, and she was able to direct the magic to close them up again. It was still difficult, and she didn't do a very clean job of it, but it still left her feeling exhilarated. Once she was done, she opened her eyes and looked at her hand.

“Wow,” she said. It was a bit of a patchwork job, with bits looking completely healed and others like tiny, wrinkled scars. Still, the cut had been small to begin with, so she doubted anyone would notice.

“Impressive,” Phen said. “You both are doing very well. With enough time and training, you could both become quite powerful. And I will take all the credit, of course!”

So, for anyone reading this, I need your opinion. I created the character of Phen a long time ago as a future husband for Éadra, and that is still what I want for them. However, in the book, they don't really get a chance to interact because Éadra spends most of the book as Erron's captive. The majority of Phen's screen time is with Learé, and I am afraid that readers will start to pair those two in their heads and feel that Phen/Éadra is a forced pairing when they are together in sequels. Now, I do intend to write a prequel before the sequel I have in mind, telling the story of the time the twins had among the humans and their return to Émere, so that will give me a chance to show their growing relationship. If I can do this well, do you all think this will help make their relationship believable, or what do you all think I should do? Phen and Learé are good friends, and I can easily see people reading too much into that. Obviously no matter what I do there may be people who prefer that pairing, but I would like it to not be the only pairing readers can accept. Thanks!